Preliminary exercise learner response

1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class.

WWW:
Research good                                                    good acting/performance/editing
good range of shots,angles                                                             
use of closeups
good pace of the shots
use of mirrors
good performance 
communicated narrative through text message

EBI:
limited shot list                                                     in depth shot list/many locations
 -more detailed needed
fast paced editing
some shots on screen for too long in second half
framing
graphic titles/typography
different costume


2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work.

WWW:
camera angles
visuals match lyrics
natural lighting

EBI:
include more
-locations
-costume
-graphics


3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent?

Quite effectively however I added some extra shots and had to compromise some props.


4) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project?

I need more planning and an in-depth shot list. And I need to include a range of lengths of a shot to go with the fast paced editing.                                                                    

5) Now you have completed the preliminary exercise, will you change anything about your actual coursework video plan? This could include your concept, cast/actors or technical elements such as mise-en-scene, camerawork or editing.

I will work on the costume of the actor. I need more in depth camera shots and angles which relay thing to the audience  And fast paced editing to match the pop song I have chosen.

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