Ignite presentation learner response

1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. 

1)3
2)3
3)3           =16/30
4)2
5)2
6)3

WWW:

Good locations
Good slides: not too much info, image on most slides
Lighting/Cinematography covered, explanation given + editing
Present well + audience: looks up & smiles, magazine covered
Some theorist covered: Van Zoonen, Propp
Audience & Industry covered
Branding + convergence

EBI:

Pause at beginning + between slides: better intro
Too much on location 
?Costume?
Too much on media language
More of a conclusion/summary
Finish research video/(or include links)
Highlight key words
??Treatment not done
??450 Words in statement: use paragraphs


2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

WWW:
Good locations
Good information
Good use of theory & theorist
Condensed note 
Nice presentation

EBI:
More theory
Less pauses
Practise
Product placement
More on Plot

3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others? 

I need to complete my statement of intent and add 50 more words. My concept is clear as it’s just a girl who has just got broken off and finds someone who makes her want to move on.This is appropriate for the brief as it is mainstream music and with the resources available I can successfully create. I need to add more paragraphs and use more media representation and audience as I was told in my presentation LR.

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